Hi John, My favorite part of your story is when you say “the world is safe again.” It feels good to live in a safe world. I hope you write more about Will and Ben’s adventures. I’d like to hear more about them from you. Love, Mommy
Hi John, I’m very impressed with your story. It’s full of action and kept me interested to the end. It was neat to hear you reading it so well. It’s cool that you have a blog. I hope to hear more from you. Love, Mormor
Hi John, My favorite part of your story is when you say “the world is safe again.” It feels good to live in a safe world. I hope you write more about Will and Ben’s adventures. I’d like to hear more about them from you. Love, Mommy
Posted May 11, 2006, 9:58 pmJohn, you read so nicely. You have a good voice for telling stories and a great imagination for writing them. Keep it up!
Posted May 12, 2006, 12:44 amHi John, I’m very impressed with your story. It’s full of action and kept me interested to the end. It was neat to hear you reading it so well. It’s cool that you have a blog. I hope to hear more from you. Love, Mormor
Posted May 14, 2006, 1:36 am