Wow, what a thrilling story. I was very nervous when you fell off the Eiffel Tower and was so relieved when the trampoline was brough in time to catch you.
I wanted to read your story because I’ve always wanted to go to Paris. But now I’m not so sure I’d want to go to the top of the Eiffel Tower because I might fall off! If I ever get to go there, I’ll be sure to take someone with me who will think as quickly as your mom did to call the hospital to come and save you. I like the way you started out describing a real trip and then used your imagination to tell a story!
Wow, what a thrilling story. I was very nervous when you fell off the Eiffel Tower and was so relieved when the trampoline was brough in time to catch you.
Posted May 14, 2006, 4:25 pmI wanted to read your story because I’ve always wanted to go to Paris. But now I’m not so sure I’d want to go to the top of the Eiffel Tower because I might fall off! If I ever get to go there, I’ll be sure to take someone with me who will think as quickly as your mom did to call the hospital to come and save you. I like the way you started out describing a real trip and then used your imagination to tell a story!
Posted May 17, 2006, 5:55 pm