http://maple.edublogs.org/2006/05/09/audreys-story/ 1st Grade Maple Audiobooks Fri, 10 Aug 2007 08:06:09 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.2 hourly 1 http://maple.edublogs.org/2006/05/09/audreys-story/comment-page-1/#comment-84 Ann Wed, 17 May 2006 21:55:50 +0000 http://maple.edublogs.org/2006/05/09/audreys-story/#comment-84 I wanted to read your story because I've always wanted to go to Paris. But now I'm not so sure I'd want to go to the top of the Eiffel Tower because I might fall off! If I ever get to go there, I'll be sure to take someone with me who will think as quickly as your mom did to call the hospital to come and save you. I like the way you started out describing a real trip and then used your imagination to tell a story! I wanted to read your story because I’ve always wanted to go to Paris. But now I’m not so sure I’d want to go to the top of the Eiffel Tower because I might fall off! If I ever get to go there, I’ll be sure to take someone with me who will think as quickly as your mom did to call the hospital to come and save you. I like the way you started out describing a real trip and then used your imagination to tell a story!

]]> http://maple.edublogs.org/2006/05/09/audreys-story/comment-page-1/#comment-45 Sarah Sun, 14 May 2006 20:25:40 +0000 http://maple.edublogs.org/2006/05/09/audreys-story/#comment-45 Wow, what a thrilling story. I was very nervous when you fell off the Eiffel Tower and was so relieved when the trampoline was brough in time to catch you. Wow, what a thrilling story. I was very nervous when you fell off the Eiffel Tower and was so relieved when the trampoline was brough in time to catch you.

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