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Margot’s Story





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  1.    1 Ann says:

    I picked your story to read because I liked all the “F” sounds in your title, but I’m glad I did because it’s a great story! I was worried when Fluffy jumped out of her tank, and very happy when she got back in, especially with the help of a friend! I hope she figures out that she can dance in the water and have fun along with her friends while she stays safe. And I’m glad that her friends figured out that they both wanted to help Fluffy, even though it didn’t seem that way at first.

    Posted May 11, 2006, 12:05 pm
  2.    2 Auntie Jill says:

    Margot: What a terrific story! Did you know we have a huge fish tank at our house? Sometimes I wonder if the fish are bored in there, and maybe they’d like to jump out of their tank, too, and explore some of our world! I think they are safer in their tank, just like Fluffy. I really enjoyed your story, and hope you keep up with your storytelling and writing. You have an awesome imagination! Love you lots, Auntie Jill

    Posted May 12, 2006, 6:37 am
  3.    3 Phannye says:

    What a wonderful story, oh best beloved!! Grampit and I are so proud to be in the same family with you. You know the most wonderful creatures, so full of adventure! As I listened to you read your story, I tried to imagine what your characters looked like. I know that Muku must be black, and a good guess might be that Fluffy is orange or gold. But the dog— hmm, hmmm — I’ll bet he is brown. Keep on writing more stories, dear. They are wonderful!

    Posted May 12, 2006, 4:05 pm
  4.    4 Uncle Trey says:

    Great story, Margot! I’m glad you like writing about animals. When I listened to your story, Bob, Ginger, and Beano were here in the room with me (they don’t go far from my side), and it perked their ears up. Maybe they knew you were talking about their furry friends! Keep up the good work!

    Love, Uncle Trey

    Posted May 13, 2006, 10:50 am